May 30, 2012

Chapter One Page Three, Dave, Downtown



David had hidden from the very beginning, of course. Both of the goons had left the alley in pursuit of Neil who, while not being the one who had given away their location, had been the only one the goons had seen. David had chosen to creep out and escape while the thugs pursued Neil.

David had seen the goon wearing the leather jacket, but had also seen the second goon, the one with the rusty voice. The rusty voiced goon was much shorter, and was wearing only a black t-shirt with the tour dates of a metal band on the back of it along with a pair of dirty blue jeans.
The metal fan veered left, when the man wearing the leather jacket veered right. It was obvious to anyone spectating that the metal fan was to somehow cut off Neil, should Neil head in the direction that the metal fan was heading.
David wanted to give Neil every chance he could get.
David kept on his person at all times a switchblade he’d inherited from his grandfather. He pulled this out as he pursued the metal fan, not entirely sure of what he’d do once he caught up with the goon. The fast goon had soon vanished, but the second goon took his sweet time in going wherever it was that he’d chosen to go. David didn’t know exactly where Neil had gone, but he was pretty sure the metal fan was headed in the wrong direction.
This is because the metal fan was headed for the bridge, and Neil’s house lay on the side of the river that David and the metal goon was currently on. David kept on him for a time, clutching the switchblade in his jeans pocket. They passed several houses with the lights still on inside, not at all uncommon on a late Saturday night. David had decided his pocket was a safer place to keep his weapon
The goon walked onto a staircase that ran parallel to the bridge and ascended to street level, where he continued to walk, heading across the river. It was at this time that David decided he’d better double back. This whole exchange, while pleasant and calm, took exactly the same amount of time it took the leather jacket wearing goon to finally catch up to Neil.
Neil had recently face planted in the worn concrete of a well worn road.
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