July 7, 2012

Chapter Thirteen Page Ten, Neil, Neil's House

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Neil woke up with not even the slightest headache or nausea. This was, to him, incredible, given the fact that he’d just been at Mary’s house the night before and had consumed liquor in quantities that in all likelihood should have given him a hangover.

He was still tired though.
He showered and brushed his teeth to try to wake himself up. He groggily walked downstairs and then noticed his parents weren’t back yet. He had a text message exchange with Mary. This resulted in him feeling worse, having now fully realized that he and Mary weren’t going to work out.
He typed and retyped a message a few times after their conversation died down, intending to send it to Mary. The first draft was long and contained sappy romantic language and Neil quickly erased it and started it again. The second draft looked a little bit more like, are you sure you don’t want to try going on a date?
He ended up saving the fourteenth draft of his message on his phone. He realized he’d killed an hour sitting in his living room, the television off, while he’d typed on his phone. He did not care.
He couldn’t make himself stand or reach far enough across the couch to grab the remote controller, so instead he typed up a new message. This one just needed a single draft, although an amount of thought that Neil found unreasonable went into its construction.
Hey Asta, how’s it going?
His phone buzzed to let him know he’d gotten a reply. This all happened before Neil could rouse himself from his seat. everything is good. Asta replied, how about you?
Neil: I’m ok. So.... We haven’t talked in forever.
Asta: yeah really! haha. hey so are you ok? after what happened Fri night?
Neil thought for a moment. The side of his head itched but he didn’t bother scratching it.
Neil: I forgot about that
Asta: forgot about what happened Fri? it seemed pretty traumatic.
Neil: I forgot that you always seem to know things before I tell you.
Asta: oh
Neil: But I’m doing fine.
Asta: cool
Neil: Hey so you wanna hang out? I don’t have anything to do today.
About a mile and a half away, Asta looked down at her cell phone. If only she wasn’t still blocked inside of her room. She’d have definitely said yes. She’d have done anything to get out of the house.
To recap, she’d spent the entire day in her room from when she’d awoken to the present moment.
Asta: not today.
Neil: what about tomorrow?
Asta: how does Tuesday sound? Asta wasn’t even completely sure it would work. Before sending it, she added, at my house, seeing as she didn’t think her parents would let her leave to go elsewhere.
Neil: Ok. I guess I’ll see you in school tomorrow?
Asta: yeah.
There wasn’t an agreement or anything that established their conversation was over, but it was. Asta didn’t have much of an excuse other than that Neil never sent anything back that day. He became preoccupied with the return of his parents.

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